
Hi Friends,
Last week I told you about Peter, the Irishman who runs a cocktail room on a hill in Lisbon. I asked if he had a food menu. He smiled and said, "Ali, this is a cocktail bar." (Read that one here.)
The week I got back from Europe, I sat in my home office with a notebook and a pen.
I wrote a letter to one person. The CEO of an early-stage fintech client of mine, the one I am fired up about right now. And I asked myself one question: if I had to win him again from zero, what story would I tell that would resonate?
Let me show you the exact exercise, my actual sales narrative for Allenix, and the steps to write yours.
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We Started Too Broad
When I started Allenix, I said yes to almost everything. Multiple industries. Multiple use cases. Any company with an AI problem and a budget.
That was the experiment. You do not find your strength in a spreadsheet. You find it by doing the work and paying attention to what happens in your chest while you do it.
Right now our plate holds outbound motions, finance and operations automation, Claude trainings, and ad hoc advisory. All real and paid efforts. Extremely grateful. All of it taught me something. But 5 weeks with no laptop gave me time to notice, and one question kept coming back:
Am I working from strength here, or am I learning a new function as I go?
What lit me up was sitting with a founder and rebuilding how revenue actually moves through their company. Getting clearer on their positioning and aligning marketing and sales. Building the right sales enablement assets to tell the story. Using the power of AI in getting the voice of the customer into every department. Making the next 30 deals easier than the last 30. That is the work I came from.
So here is where Allenix stands today: Build AI revenue systems for B2B companies between $5 million and $25 million with complex sales cycles.
I am not done narrowing. I can feel another cut coming. But this is ground where I trust the expertise, and where AI lets me be both architect and mason. I design the revenue engine and I lay the bricks myself with the team.

The 5-Part Narrative
The structure comes from Emma Stratton and her book Make It Punchy. Five parts, in order.
The Shift. Something changed in your customer's world that forces a decision.
The Villain. Name the thing causing the pain. An object, an approach, a person.
The Obstacles. 3 concrete, daily problems the villain creates.
The Dream. What they want, plus how they will feel when they get it.
The Solution. Where you finally enter, tied straight back to the dream.
I initially wrote mine by hand, to that one CEO. Write to one real person, which is always my recommendation when creating marketing and sales assets.

Allenix Sales Narrative
After more edits, I recorded my voice reading my scribbles back to me in a written transcript. After some edits, the letter below is the page that survived.

The Sales Letter I Wrote
The Shift. Something changed in the last 18 months and you feel it every week. AI made every competitor faster. It also made your buyer harder to convince. They show up having read everything about you and your category, and they believe less of it than they used to.
Inside your own company, AI made a different kind of mess. You look at your company’s token burn and realize it has no direct correlation to revenue. Your people are using AI all the time. A better email here, faster research there, a cool new vibe-coded tool. Everybody is a little quicker, building faster. But the company is not. Deals close at the same pace, and it costs you more to win a customer than it did last year.
The Villain. The AI mirage. From a distance it looks like progress. AI trainings booked. AI tools bought. Somebody hired to upskill the team. Everyone is busy. Everyone knows how to build a GPT. But walk closer and there is nothing to drink. Nothing compounds. And every hour the mirage eats comes straight out of the work that actually moves your number, while your board keeps asking about your AI strategy.
The Obstacles. Your closers turned into implementers. You hired them to sell, and they spend Tuesday cleaning fields and wiring up a tool somebody bought in the spring. They know it is not the job, and yet, they are being held accountable to the same quota.
You cannot buy your way out either. Ten narrow tools, and not one of them moves a number on its own. The role that would connect them finally has a name, AI data engineer, and a qualified one runs $200,000 a year. The people who can really do it barely exist, and even when you find one, your whole AI strategy rests on a single person.
Every CEO will say "measure what matters." But nobody can tell you what the number is. That is how every team hits its goal in the same quarter the company misses its own.
The story is as scattered as the numbers. Marketing is shipping whatever concept the agency sold them, aimed at your competitors instead of your customers. Your best rep tells a different story on every call. Product builds for whoever talked loudest in the last meeting. Ask those three to write one sentence on why customers pick you, and you will get three different companies.
10+ strong people, rowing hard, in four directions. So much effort for so little distance.
The Dream. Here is what you actually want. Every oar in the water, pulling in the same direction.
One playbook and scoreboard the whole company trusts, so Monday's argument is about what to do next, not whose number is right. One story, told the same way on the website, in the deck, and on every call. Both built from what your customers actually say.
And you want it to compound. What customer success hears feeds what marketing says. What marketing says sharpens what sales sells. What sales learns steers what product builds. A flywheel, where every win makes the next one easier.
Underneath all of it is the part you would not say out loud. You want to stop guessing. You want to be the CEO who got this right.
The Solution. There are four ways to get there. Hire it and wait 90 days for dashboards. Rent it and watch the playbook leave with the consultant. Buy it and own another adoption project. Or build it in.
We build it in. Our team builds a revenue architecture inside the tools you already own. An extension of your team. Strategy and positioning first, so every team tells the same story. Then the data foundation, so every team plays to the same scoreboard. Then a context layer wired into every function. That layer is the tether between your teams, and it is what makes the flywheel turn.
Your team gets faster, and they get the credit. The initial foundation is live in 30 days. And you own all of it
Then go be the CEO again.

Write yours this week
That is the whole thing. The above is motivating me to a new direction and rewriting the homepage we are updating now.
Write it by hand, first. You will get to your truth a lot faster
Name the villain out loud. A villain you cannot name is a problem you cannot sell against.
Read it to your newest rep. If they can retell it with no notes, it works. If they cannot, simplify it more.
I hope this inspires you to re-write yours.
'Til next time,
--Ali
P.S. If it is easier to talk yours through, grab 30 minutes with me. I will record the call and email your sales narrative back to you.


About Me: I am Ali Mamujee. I run Allenix, where we build AI revenue engines for B2B companies between $5 million and $25 million with complex sales cycles. I’m soooo excited for football season to start.

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